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Neil Barker's avatar

Both wonderful poems, Ann and Brian. I do like how both of your poems, side-by-side can be read downwards individually and across horizontally. Some horizontal lines standout to me especially:

"you are there...like a flower testing the air"

"into opening eyes...Awaken,"

"you see what you are...you are this stillness;"

"you remember...you remember"

"you are changed...your new name."

Thanks for sharing this exchange.

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Julie Gabrielli's avatar

This is exquisite! The reverie of word-images and the lovely surprise of how the two align, side by side. What a cool way to end the series.

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