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Ann Collins's avatar

thank you LO!

Ronald Drimmel's avatar

Beautiful. I'm a big fan of the original story, and love how you've transposed the questions asked (yes - more relevant than ever!) to our times. Also a big yes to the mushroom metaphor. Thank you! šŸ„

Ann Collins's avatar

Ronald, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Such a timeless and tender tale, then and now. šŸ’›

Glyn Lehmann's avatar

Thank you, Ann for this beautiful and thought-provoking poem and post. I love the connections you make between Maker and Made in these various contexts. The mushroom photo is perfect! Nature, our creations, ourselves? Staring back.

Ann Collins's avatar

Glyn, the ongoing need to bring something alive is so natural. You’re always showing us the opposite of Victor Frankenstein—the joyful Maker! I can’t wait to see what Scatterlings will bring. 😊 My story is outlined. Now I’m doing some research as I fill in some tiny details.

Glyn Lehmann's avatar

Very exciting! 😊

Kimberly Warner's avatar

This poem is stunning and chilling. I went back and read it three times, layers of insight and shiver with each pass. And the final question, ā€œShould we love this monster of our making?ā€

I hope so. Because even the monster is a reflection of us, maybe our shadow, but what better way to bring it into the light than to love?

I cannot wait to see Frankenstein!

Ann Collins's avatar

Oh, I hope you do get to see the movie, Kimberly! Even if it’s on a small screen, cozy at home, snuggling with David.

We love our monsters, don’t we? They teach us so much. How we make everything matters, and I’ve seen the way you pour so much love into your work.

Beautiful creations, for sure. šŸ’›

Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

Frankenstein is on my short list for possible future read-alouds. Maybe if we do read it, we will watch the film afterwards. It's interesting to me how very different the book is from the popular imagination of what Frankenstein means. Even to the way we think about the monster. And yet the story asks so many questions that are still relevant. Perhaps even more than Mary Shelly could ever have dreamed.

There is something so perverse in the failure to love the work of our own hands. We were made by a loving creator and yet we fail in imaging that Maker when our making goes awry.

Ann Collins's avatar

ā€œThere is something so perverse in the failure to love the work of our own hands. We were made by a loving creator and yet we fail in imaging that Maker when our making goes awry.ā€

Melanie, you’re saying something so true. What’s the nature of our constant human need to be reminded of our belonging—beloved as we are, have always been, and will always be?

I read that Mary’s mother died in childbirth, and her father was grieving/distant during her childhood. She often felt like a burden to her family. Heartbreaking.

Shital Morjaria (she/her)'s avatar

Lovely Ann!

Ann Collins's avatar

Thanks so much, Shital! šŸ’›

liz āā†Ÿā˜½'s avatar

Blessed Halloween, Ann. I have Frankenstein on my watch-list for this weekend. Wishing you a cozy and magical Hallowtide. šŸ–¤

Ann Collins's avatar

And to you as well, dear Liz! šŸ’›

Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

I've been up awhile reading all the wonderful Halloween poems that have already been posted. This is the first post I've come across about Frankenstein and I was thrilled to read it because there is something eerily familiar and disturbing about those monsters of our own making that always fascinate us. Thank you, Ann, for this.

"Between Maker and Made,

In delicate distance, the question dwells

Of what is ours to save

As world darkens and the music swells?

Should we love this monster of our making?

An eye looks up from forest floor, unblinking."

Ann Collins's avatar

Thank you, Martin, we find ourselves surrounded by monsters now, don't we? Some by our own making, yes--and I always hope to stay awake to that. To learn and do better. And for all the monsters unbidden in our world, it's hard not to live in fear of them. The theme of forgiveness shined in the movie for me. I'm interested to see--if or how-- it also appears in Mary Shelley's book. Wishing you a lovely All Hallows Eve! šŸ’›

Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

If there is a tour of the White House today, nobody in it will have to dress up for Halloween. That's for sure!

Ann Collins's avatar

The horror is real, sadly. šŸ’›

Martin Mc Carthy's avatar

Yes, that’s why we’re turning to Halloween and scary monsters for a bit of relief from it.

Manuela Thames's avatar

I definitely wonder about this, too:

"How might our past, current, and future mistakes be incorporated into the fabric of daily forgiveness? Will we be able to foster a willingness to move forward in inovative and humane ways—always imagining ourselves in a more generous, loving, and open light—before it is too late?"

Weston Parker's avatar

Very good Ann. I have often thought that Frankenstein was a love story of sorts, between a scientist and his ambition. Thanks

Ann Collins's avatar

So true, Wes. There are so many parallels we might draw these days.

Weston Parker's avatar

There really are endless parallels and hubris plays a big role in all of them, that and ignorance of the lessons of history. Btw, I love Young Frankensteinā€¦šŸ˜‰

Ann Collins's avatar

Hilarious and classic. Young Frankenstein will live forever.

James Hart's avatar

I can't wait to see this one myself. I've always loved Frankenstein. One thing here you mentioned:

"How might our past, current, and future mistakes be incorporated into the fabric of daily forgiveness? Will we be able to foster a willingness to move forward in inovative and humane ways—always imagining ourselves in a more generous, loving, and open light—before it’s too late?"

Yes, how indeed! I think what may help is to recalibrate the perspective our culture has insisted on: that we're rugged individuals, blazing our own trail. (Forgiveness is all the harder when we feel unconnected.) In reality, we're part of many layers of cycles: ecological, social, ancestral, spiritual, etc. We aren't separate, but part of many things that thrive or fall as we ourselves do. Not exactly a cure-all I realize, but I think remembering this can help.

Ann Collins's avatar

"Forgiveness is all the harder when we feel unconnected."

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Thanks, James. I think we're like minded on this. Everything good begins with our own sense of belonging and beloved-ness. It's a warmth and security we all crave from the moment of our birth when we find ourselves suddenly terrified, gasping and disconnected.

Re-finding our true belonging in the "ecological, social, ancestral, spiritual" web of existence is the work of a mature Life. Christianity is supposed to be teaching this, but sadly, we see so much emphasis placed on modeling "correctness" rather than truly loving one another. When I taught 4 year-olds at church, I feel like they understood this so much better than adults.

James Hart's avatar

I’ll bet they did! Kids today are far more natural in their understanding of being present, noticing, feeling connections. We lose that, I think, when we focus more on multiplying by 10 and gerunds than we do about our connections. (Not that we can just throw the former away of course; it’s a struggle to keep a good balance.)

Ann Collins's avatar

Yes, so true. And even easier and more natural than we might have imagined. Just being awake to the idea of balance—the essential need for it—that can feel calming for parents. When we decided to homeschool our kids, our first priority was to help foster their natural kindness and curiosity. I remember hoping that if they were also academically strong, that would be a bonus. But if I had failed to teach them kindness, then that would be a great sadness for me. A failure on my part. Now I see my kids as two of the kindest young adults I know. Also, they both did just fine in grad school— this was also a huge relief if I’m honest. homeschooling is not necessary, of course. It’s only one educational option among many. šŸ’›

Nathan Slake's avatar

Wondrous poem and really great write-up and thoughts on the film, Ann, thank you. I have yet to see it but would like to. My first watching on del Toro's Pan's Labyrinth has a special place in my heart and I've enjoyed reading of his note-taking process and seeing snippets of his notebook via Jillian Hess' Substack.

Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Guillermo del Toroā€˜s new adaptation of Frankenstein has been out in cinemas here since mid October but not in the small towns close enough to consider so I wait, with impatience... I have heard so much in praise of this film.

Your poem is beautiful Ann, chilling also and profoundly thought provoking...

I loved this especially...

"Between Maker and Made,

In delicate distance, the question dwells

Of what is ours to save"

Late as I am to reading, I will save Halloween wishes for next year and send November hugs instead.. x

Ann Collins's avatar

November hugs are so good. I wonder what it is about this month that makes it seem like the walls of this labyrinth are paper-thin? Is it the same something that makes a hug feel extra warm? Yours are especially so, and I’m very grateful for you, Susie xoxo