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Neil Barker's avatar

I like this chapter, Ann and that last photo with the two trees growing close together. I like these lines from that second poem by Rumi:

"Be empty of worrying.

Move outside the tangle of fear-thinking

Live in silence."

Thank you for sharing and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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Ann Collins's avatar

Thank you, always, for your faithful reading, Neil. Rumi's poetry is truly without time constraints. Written around the middle of the 13th century, it is evergreen. 🌲

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Ralph Turner's avatar

Photo no5 - how fitting for this touching story. I've even learned a new word today - gemel. Thank you for sharing.

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Ann Collins's avatar

So glad you like the image & the idea of gemels, Ralph. Where I hike, there are numerous pairs I've noticed. Everyday miracles. I think these two are especially beautiful. And stay tuned . . . I have a video of them, too. :-)

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Thomas Cleary's avatar

I’m fascinated by this meeting of two different dimensions of time - the ephemeral nature of human life and the longer’ more ancient essence of trees. It’s clearly relative as much as that of a mayfly to a sturgeon, a child to an old man.

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Ann Collins's avatar

Ohhh Thomas, I love those parallels. Beautiful.

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Julie Gabrielli's avatar

Lovely. The Rumi and the photos are perfect with the story. What will Annu decide?

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Ann Collins's avatar

Aw thank you, Julie! I've changed my mind about the ending several times . . .

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Kim Nelson's avatar

Your weaving of nature, photography, Rumi and observations on love creates a tapestry I want to be enfolded in. This is gorgeous; and the turn, the invitation, is exciting.

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Ann Collins's avatar

Thank you for your support of this small project, Kim. Now in the center of this story, having a reader like *you* who keeps lighting a candle, who keeps showing me the next part of the pathway . . . truly, it helps me see where I'm going. 💛

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

I’m falling deeper and deeper into the enigmatic, reverent trance of your story. Oh how I hope Annu joins the lineage of the forest’s deepest roots. “To return would be to die.” I will never look at two trees growing alongside each other the same.🙏

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Ann Collins's avatar

Kimberly, the ordinary world is just waiting to show us something new every day. Once we see it, it's ours forever. I love that you really get that. And live it. Thank you for your presence here. 💛

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Emma Liles's avatar

I sat down this evening and read chapters 4, 5, and 6. The richness you share here Ann feels like something from the old world - that is not actually old, but underneath - the seeming noise that these times can hold. I love the feeling-path you create with the photos woven in with the flow of the story. Very much something to savor.

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Ann Collins's avatar

Emma, it's an honor that you would savor this story. Thank you for your deep listening to the undercurrent that I'm hoping to navigate. Fairytales seem to move in a quiet way that's not time-bound. Thank you for feeling--along with me--the way stories are free to loop and circle back to us, as many times as we wish. What joy and sadness we try to share.

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Conny Borgelioen's avatar

Ann, I love Annu's ability to love Olli in his changed form, even though she misses him. It's so inspiring!

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Ann Collins's avatar

Conny, this constant change, this shifting sand. Always looking for the new way forward, aren't we? I love that you're here for it.

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Ben Wakeman's avatar

This story is filled with such powerful visuals, I can see every scene so clearly as I read. What will Annu do? Such an impossible choice.

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Ann Collins's avatar

Oh Ben, I love hearing you say that. Super encouraging. An impossible choice is something for a writer to savor--as you well know. I have changed my mind about the ending. Twice.

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