These are beautiful, Ann. I feel a lovely offset between the hokku and the capping verse that sparks a moment of alertness in me. I adore "a moth on the window screen / watches me sleep". It's magical.
Thank you for sharing these, and the way that you present them.
These are beautiful, Ann. I feel a lovely offset between the hokku and the capping verse that sparks a moment of alertness in me. I adore "a moth on the window screen / watches me sleep". It's magical.
Thank you for sharing these, and the way that you present them.
I’ve had such amazing encouragement from Dick. I will bow to my Sensei! 🙏 They are a deep joy to make, and re-make and re-make until I am somewhat happy with them. Thanks so much for reading, Nathan.
These are beautiful, Ann. I feel a lovely offset between the hokku and the capping verse that sparks a moment of alertness in me. I adore "a moth on the window screen / watches me sleep". It's magical.
Thank you for sharing these, and the way that you present them.
I’ve had such amazing encouragement from Dick. I will bow to my Sensei! 🙏 They are a deep joy to make, and re-make and re-make until I am somewhat happy with them. Thanks so much for reading, Nathan.